I completely agree with your critique. I had to read and reread the above comment to try and comprehend her thoughts due to the terrible sentence structure.

The stripping comment was completely immature and irrelevant.

David A. just doesn't have the poise, charisma, and the confidence that David C. has. David A. needs to come back in like 5 years when he knows who he is and can portray himself in his music. I think at that time he will appeal to a larger market of fans. His age and adolescent fan base will be a kiss a death. We will be watching him on one of those where are they now specials in like 5 years. His fan base will grow up and he will be another new kid on the block.